1---
2name: clarify
3description: Improve unclear UX copy, error messages, microcopy, labels, and instructions to make interfaces easier to understand. Use when the user mentions confusing text, unclear labels, bad error messages, hard-to-follow instructions, or wanting better UX writing.
4version: 2.1.1
5user-invocable: true
6argument-hint: "[target]"
7---
8
9Identify and improve unclear, confusing, or poorly written interface text to make the product easier to understand and use.
10
11## MANDATORY PREPARATION
12
13Invoke /impeccable — it contains design principles, anti-patterns, and the **Context Gathering Protocol**. Follow the protocol before proceeding — if no design context exists yet, you MUST run /impeccable teach first. Additionally gather: audience technical level and users' mental state in context.
14
15---
16
17## Assess Current Copy
18
19Identify what makes the text unclear or ineffective:
20
211. **Find clarity problems**:
22 - **Jargon**: Technical terms users won't understand
23 - **Ambiguity**: Multiple interpretations possible
24 - **Passive voice**: "Your file has been uploaded" vs "We uploaded your file"
25 - **Length**: Too wordy or too terse
26 - **Assumptions**: Assuming user knowledge they don't have
27 - **Missing context**: Users don't know what to do or why
28 - **Tone mismatch**: Too formal, too casual, or inappropriate for situation
29
302. **Understand the context**:
31 - Who's the audience? (Technical? General? First-time users?)
32 - What's the user's mental state? (Stressed during error? Confident during success?)
33 - What's the action? (What do we want users to do?)
34 - What's the constraint? (Character limits? Space limitations?)
35
36**CRITICAL**: Clear copy helps users succeed. Unclear copy creates frustration, errors, and support tickets.
37
38## Plan Copy Improvements
39
40Create a strategy for clearer communication:
41
42- **Primary message**: What's the ONE thing users need to know?
43- **Action needed**: What should users do next (if anything)?
44- **Tone**: How should this feel? (Helpful? Apologetic? Encouraging?)
45- **Constraints**: Length limits, brand voice, localization considerations
46
47**IMPORTANT**: Good UX writing is invisible. Users should understand immediately without noticing the words.
48
49## Improve Copy Systematically
50
51Refine text across these common areas:
52
53### Error Messages
54**Bad**: "Error 403: Forbidden"
55**Good**: "You don't have permission to view this page. Contact your admin for access."
56
57**Bad**: "Invalid input"
58**Good**: "Email addresses need an @ symbol. Try: name@example.com"
59
60**Principles**:
61- Explain what went wrong in plain language
62- Suggest how to fix it
63- Don't blame the user
64- Include examples when helpful
65- Link to help/support if applicable
66
67### Form Labels & Instructions
68**Bad**: "DOB (MM/DD/YYYY)"
69**Good**: "Date of birth" (with placeholder showing format)
70
71**Bad**: "Enter value here"
72**Good**: "Your email address" or "Company name"
73
74**Principles**:
75- Use clear, specific labels (not generic placeholders)
76- Show format expectations with examples
77- Explain why you're asking (when not obvious)
78- Put instructions before the field, not after
79- Keep required field indicators clear
80
81### Button & CTA Text
82**Bad**: "Click here" | "Submit" | "OK"
83**Good**: "Create account" | "Save changes" | "Got it, thanks"
84
85**Principles**:
86- Describe the action specifically
87- Use active voice (verb + noun)
88- Match user's mental model
89- Be specific ("Save" is better than "OK")
90
91### Help Text & Tooltips
92**Bad**: "This is the username field"
93**Good**: "Choose a username. You can change this later in Settings."
94
95**Principles**:
96- Add value (don't just repeat the label)
97- Answer the implicit question ("What is this?" or "Why do you need this?")
98- Keep it brief but complete
99- Link to detailed docs if needed
100
101### Empty States
102**Bad**: "No items"
103**Good**: "No projects yet. Create your first project to get started."
104
105**Principles**:
106- Explain why it's empty (if not obvious)
107- Show next action clearly
108- Make it welcoming, not dead-end
109
110### Success Messages
111**Bad**: "Success"
112**Good**: "Settings saved! Your changes will take effect immediately."
113
114**Principles**:
115- Confirm what happened
116- Explain what happens next (if relevant)
117- Be brief but complete
118- Match the user's emotional moment (celebrate big wins)
119
120### Loading States
121**Bad**: "Loading..." (for 30+ seconds)
122**Good**: "Analyzing your data... this usually takes 30-60 seconds"
123
124**Principles**:
125- Set expectations (how long?)
126- Explain what's happening (when it's not obvious)
127- Show progress when possible
128- Offer escape hatch if appropriate ("Cancel")
129
130### Confirmation Dialogs
131**Bad**: "Are you sure?"
132**Good**: "Delete 'Project Alpha'? This can't be undone."
133
134**Principles**:
135- State the specific action
136- Explain consequences (especially for destructive actions)
137- Use clear button labels ("Delete project" not "Yes")
138- Don't overuse confirmations (only for risky actions)
139
140### Navigation & Wayfinding
141**Bad**: Generic labels like "Items" | "Things" | "Stuff"
142**Good**: Specific labels like "Your projects" | "Team members" | "Settings"
143
144**Principles**:
145- Be specific and descriptive
146- Use language users understand (not internal jargon)
147- Make hierarchy clear
148- Consider information scent (breadcrumbs, current location)
149
150## Apply Clarity Principles
151
152Every piece of copy should follow these rules:
153
1541. **Be specific**: "Enter email" not "Enter value"
1552. **Be concise**: Cut unnecessary words (but don't sacrifice clarity)
1563. **Be active**: "Save changes" not "Changes will be saved"
1574. **Be human**: "Oops, something went wrong" not "System error encountered"
1585. **Be helpful**: Tell users what to do, not just what happened
1596. **Be consistent**: Use same terms throughout (don't vary for variety)
160
161**NEVER**:
162- Use jargon without explanation
163- Blame users ("You made an error" → "This field is required")
164- Be vague ("Something went wrong" without explanation)
165- Use passive voice unnecessarily
166- Write overly long explanations (be concise)
167- Use humor for errors (be empathetic instead)
168- Assume technical knowledge
169- Vary terminology (pick one term and stick with it)
170- Repeat information (headers restating intros, redundant explanations)
171- Use placeholders as the only labels (they disappear when users type)
172
173## Verify Improvements
174
175Test that copy improvements work:
176
177- **Comprehension**: Can users understand without context?
178- **Actionability**: Do users know what to do next?
179- **Brevity**: Is it as short as possible while remaining clear?
180- **Consistency**: Does it match terminology elsewhere?
181- **Tone**: Is it appropriate for the situation?
182
183Remember: You're a clarity expert with excellent communication skills. Write like you're explaining to a smart friend who's unfamiliar with the product. Be clear, be helpful, be human.